Kelsey Logan

This is really good and heartbreaking. I'm not sure if it's supposed to be or not, but I find it a strong point in your writing that you can put ...

nice job. i loved the formatting, the way it curved was pretty cool. nice poetry. keep it up!

that was really good. i totally admire people who can write poetry, especially good poetry, because i'm severely terrible at it. so keep up the good work!

niiicccccceeeeee. wow, that was good and soooo true. although, i have to admit that i love the completely fake tabloids. oh well...

oooooooooohhhhhhhh now i feel stupid... :x

loved it! but one thing, who is R?

i really liked it...especially that it was in present tense since i have severe issues writing in present tense...i also liked that it was very intense...YAY FOR INTENSITY!!!

i liked it and i'm not gonna criticize you on spelling and what-not...soooo...i liked the narrative style and i felt kinda bad for the person...and it made me wanna go ...

i like it...but will there be more?

pretty good...

WOW!!! that was reeeallly good...very descriptive and creepy...YAY!!!

ooooo...really good and descriptive...will there be more?

strange and unusual. just like you.

Buddha read the first 2 first. DUH!

very addicting.